I really enjoyed that but I needed to reread it to take it all in. I think i need to read it all right from the beginning fairly soon. The way I'd like it to go would be to get the loose ends settled in Truman's life and the ending to be hopeful, within the restraints of the scenario. I'm not sure what else what I can say.
Thanks for that Doughty Louise, that's very useful and much appreciated. Yes, I had hoped for more feedback but it is what it is. Regarding what happens next, hang on in there, nearly there, it is going your way! If you want to read it all again, the link below is to the post with links to all the first chapters.
I really enjoyed that but I needed to reread it to take it all in. I think i need to read it all right from the beginning fairly soon. The way I'd like it to go would be to get the loose ends settled in Truman's life and the ending to be hopeful, within the restraints of the scenario. I'm not sure what else what I can say.
I'm surprised you don't get more comments!
Thanks for that Doughty Louise, that's very useful and much appreciated. Yes, I had hoped for more feedback but it is what it is. Regarding what happens next, hang on in there, nearly there, it is going your way! If you want to read it all again, the link below is to the post with links to all the first chapters.
https://chrisdixon.substack.com/p/konsk-the-patafiction
I'll post another update with all the links when I finish and probably put it together as an ebook for download from my web site.
Thanks again. Chris
thank you Chris